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Tuesday, 22 November 2016

Editing a paragraph


when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush

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When it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was  rare. Because there wasn’t much bushes around. because it was  a huge forest it looked so amazing from the inside out it had the spectacular smell of chocolate and strawberries combine on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush.

Thursday, 3 November 2016

The Bush

Once upon a time there was a little boy called daniel but the people called him bush boy because he lived in the bush But one day he set off to the land of the lost to find a new home. In another bush of course. The only thing standing his way were the thorny bushes,hairy spiders and most of all the big black overlord bear. So he got all his biggest baddest armor and weapons Once he got through the thorny bushes and hairy spiders He finally fought the beast we got to point where they were Fighting our lives but finally i got him on the ground so ran up to Him and slit his neck. Now it all mine all of it is mine to the bushes to the trees it’s all. So finally daniel found his own where nobody will call him anything.

Tuesday, 6 September 2016

kiwi the hiwi

What are the 2-3 Hiwi the Kiwi lessons you are including in your story?
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On the weekend all the boys in my family went fishing. To be specific our names are Hone  dad-john and my brother Stone.

The place we went to was Beast Valley. It’s a place where nobody dares to go there because the river monster but we call it a taniwha.

The river was really polluted with rubbish so we  took some of time out of fishing time and we picked up all the rubbish by the river” was cleaned by the time we were finished it was night time.

So  my dad and my brother put bait on our fishing lines hoping for the fish to catch its eye.

 Hours later my dad’s line was pulling down all the boys pulled it 3 mins later we finally got it when we got we
It wasn’t a beast it was just a snapper.
It was to big so  had put it back.
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Wednesday, 10 August 2016

dictagloss

countries who host the Olympics must show they have the capacitate, space to hold the games and invest their own money into them.For the deluxe of people the hosting countries hope to get more money altermitly the ioc get to decide to get to host them.

In 2012 the Olympics were held in London  it was the 3rd time London hosted the Olympics once in 1908 then 1948 one of the up sets of the were shot-put when velery adams came 2nd.  


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Tuesday, 5 July 2016

hero

a hero is a person who protects others and defends others.a hero also save you from danger and when you need help fire fighter  docters and police are all exsple of heros.

Tuesday, 31 May 2016

fraction circle

spider man

Peter Parker was bitten by a highly enhanced spiders that gave him super powers that included strength agility spider senses scaling building and spider webs that shoots out of his rests.

Spider man wears a red and blue costume and a mask to keep his identity a secret
                                           

Thursday, 26 May 2016

personification dictagloss

the moon danced apon the ocean as if on a spot lighted stage. the tired old shoes looked lonesome at bake of  clossit. the shelf phone alarm screamed and hollied in till i  rolled out finely  rolled out of bed.

Wednesday, 11 May 2016

Friday, 6 May 2016

nz at war

holiday highlights

Hello to you all the holidays are over i am so excited about school but i am really excited about telling you all about my holidays so let’s get started. On monday me and my family traveled down the line and stayed there for 3 days.Well we were down the line we went to the beach and did some bombs then we got some fish and chips.


My family and i  went to the movies and watch the  jungle book my favorite part was when baloo and mowgli was singing in the river weate lots of junk food after that we went home and had mcdonalds for dinner we ordered big macs sundays.

On friday i went to the pools i ate some chips the rest of the time i did bome’s then on saturday me and my family had a rest day on the last day of the holidays i went to the warriors game shane johnson got a tri and the warriors won the game.                
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Friday, 18 March 2016

Our Rocks Rocks

Thursday, 3 March 2016

The Asteroid

Walt: Understand new words using our prior knowledge and clues from text.

Wednesday, 2 March 2016

Rock doc vocab

Walt:use relevant parts of the text to help us accurately questions

Rock doc

Walt: Understand new words from the book we have read