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Tuesday 22 November 2016

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when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush

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When it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was  rare. Because there wasn’t much bushes around. because it was  a huge forest it looked so amazing from the inside out it had the spectacular smell of chocolate and strawberries combine on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush.

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